You are unfair

poem, break up

If only I had been smart,
I would have known you cheated from the start.
So, take a look at my heart
and see how you tore me apart.
Here our love will depart

To think you would care,
about the memories that we share.
You are so unfair,
caressing her hair
at that very same chair.
It is a fire I cannot bear.

Now, to my own delight,
I am glad you will not even fight.
I am happy being alone at night,
for you are not a noble knight.
Just get out of my sight.

Author's Note

Reviews are welcomed.
This is dedicated to every girl OR guy who have been broken by someone worthless. ^_^ It is not a personal experience, but feelings I have gathered from people who have gone through such a thing. So, I tried to express it as much as I can. Hope you like it.

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

I like the agresive ending of this poem, very well written. Excellent poem indeed ^^

[Frantzuu]

This is deep! I hate writing about stuff like that because they're hard to write about, and I appreciate the fact that you're strong enough to do that. THanks for sharing. :D

[Tyler Allen]

This is heart-wrenching and bitter, but beautiful. Great job at expressing the anger and loss, the pain, of love lost. Feeling of jealousy, or acting like you don't care. I can feel the pain of this poem. Great job!

[Sasha]

second stanza, last word is misspelt. It should be bear instead of bare.
Other than that, I love it! Perfect. It's simple form urges you to read it without compromising even a bit of the image your words convey.
Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Direct and honest. Sometime we are the last to know. A perfect ending to the poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Color of the Iris]

Good job, this poem made your anger apparent, and I'm sorry if you lost someone you really cared about.

[Nothing Personal]

Spot on..You can write many more but the best is coming to terms with it..It happens, S**t happens..Good poem :-)