White faith

White faith

When you are blind,
just close your eyes.
There is a light to find
your way through the lies.

Wait for after dark,
never let it consume you
until that shining ark
comes there to save you.

It is only good to cry not bleed.
Wounds heal with trust;
doubt is but a demon to feed.
So, faith in the heart is a must.

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed~

Reviews

[Masaking]

The faith before you reach God's hand XD
Nice job!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This is a prayer IMHO, not LIKE a prayer it is a prayer it reads well flows smoothly
and like a petite chason it sings softly into the ear! Well done!

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Interesting and hopeful writing, great poem.

[Karli]

beautiful expression:)

[Austin Smith]

Your third stanza could use some tweaking; the rhythm was very much thrown off, and it made that stanza a little difficult to read. Nevertheless, I found it to be pleasant.

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. I like the overall feel of this. Rather calm. The only thing I would say is to tweak the second stanza a little. "you' and the 'you' as a repeat spoils the write a little.

[M.Kilani]

it's been a while since I've read any of you work ... I guess I've been busy lately .. any way great piece you have there, just when I started to lose faith this one made me remember that dawn comes just after the darkest hours of the night, I personally thank you for such a great piece... well done Ean ... well done

[Mauricio Montoya]

very insigthful and powerful piece. Excellent write.

[Huggy Bear]

Powerful and beautifully written:)

[Havatara]

I agree, it's really powerful, and I loved the message. In a couple of places there needed to be a comma for the way I was reading it, but I'm not sure if you're hearing the same way I am, so do with it what you like.