Rain

Rain


Rain...oh please rain,
wash away our pain;
it's too agonizing,
for we regretted before realizing.
Don't just hide our tears,
for we can't face our fears.

For you fall from a sky,
that for us will always cry,
since we're mostly feeling blue.
You realize It's sad but true.
With umbrellas on the ground,
we're crying with no one around.

Rain...oh heavy rain,
you aren't what we want to gain,
but with our hearts heavy, scared
and full of secrets unshared,
you might mend our scars,
for you came down from the stars.

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed~

Reviews

[Romeion Case]

Ahh the rain....one of nature's most used symbolic elements. :-) we all search for purity and that purifying element in everything, that one thing that will make everything else bearable. nice job of representing a very familiar encounter. :-)

[Dream Weaver]

Everyone needs the rain, be it
for cleansing or soul searching.
Nice write BB...

[TamiViolet]

Rain does provide with a cleansing effect.... You make a melody out of regret....
I think so many can relate to this, for we all have secrets.... The last stanza is beautiful and bittersweet...