Sugarcoated lies

poem

Sugarcoated lies

 

The sweet memories of happier days

Keep you away from facing the future

So good at easing your life’s craze

As you are missing the bigger picture

 

When your tears run down your cheeks

Rainbows are stretched through the sky

When the fear in your heart speaks

You keep it inside with a one simple lie

 

You try to keep your heart so white

Regardless of what you should be facing

But you need a different kind of light

And a future you should start chasing

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed~

Reviews

[Manda]

wow this was very good. the grammar and flow was nice. i felt the emotion as i read this. short and straight to the point. well done once again! 100/100

Nice work overall. Good rhyming.

[Undying Glory]

wow i like this a lot, really intriguing. that last stanza's the best in my opinion. all in all great job