What are you?

a song

what are you?
isn't it enough you hurt me
how cruel are you?
are my tears that worthless?
why do i let you hurt me
while my soul is between your hands?

if this is love
it brings me pain
if its my fault
i will never say a word
if its my fate
i will live in suffering

isn't it cruel?
that you decieve me into loving you
wasting my heart away
it was all a game to you
all my hope for you is gone

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is hard to learn and stand your ground when someone want to hurt and abuse only. Poem is very good. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ross Saunders]

Feels like there's a story here that we're not quite getting yet. I think you could go a lot deeper into this and expand on it. It's pretty good, but I think you could expand on this a lot.