Time heals

poem

Time heals

I dance under the rain
Like a kid once again
Raindrops stop so suddenly
So time heals occasionally

Don't forget a love you lived
Even if your feelings are mixed
If thorns hurt you by remembrance
Then roses gave you a beautiful fragrance

Look at the bond between your eyes
They sleep & cry together through the times
Although they never ever meet
Somehow together they are complete

That should always be you and I
Dont believe your delusional lie
Time heals broken hearts
And now our new beginning starts

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed~

Reviews

[Ross Saunders]

I like the rain imagery, something I often do myself. This was a very beautifully written peace, lots of good words at work here. You set up a lot excellent images that do help to express the message of the poem perfectly.

[Shutterbug]

Very good poem. I really like the way it is so positive looking toward the future but still remembering the past. Great job.

[JustWantLove]

Like a Band-Aid for the heart; wonderfully composed and ink-full of hopeful truth! A+ in my world!