Time heals

poem

Time heals

I dance under the rain
Like a kid once again
Raindrops stop so suddenly
So time heals occasionally

Don't forget a love you lived
Even if your feelings are mixed
If thorns hurt you by remembrance
Then roses gave you a beautiful fragrance

Look at the bond between your eyes
They sleep & cry together through the times
Although they never ever meet
Somehow together they are complete

That should always be you and I
Dont believe your delusional lie
Time heals broken hearts
And now our new beginning starts

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed~

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I dance under the rain
Like a kid once again
Raindrops stop so suddenly
So time heals occasionally
:::::indeed it does..everything happens once in awhile , just never know..maybe that is a good thing..we wait for the surprize.

[Liverpoolfan]

Lovely poem. Just... lovely. Yes, I am aware that I have said 'lovely' twice... but oh well. It really is quite good.

[*Evelen*]

Wow this is an amazing poem! I't so beautiful and well writen. Your emotions leak out and fill the reader =) well done I loved it

[Sasha]

Woah!! Insane poem. I love it.! The Words just blend in together to form a strong base.
I loved the second stanza! wow!

[Manda]

i love this! wonderful write once again! keep it up!

[Tate Morgan]

Hm I read something deep and kind in this but dont take on anothers pain it is a cancer to you .Just share the sky with them and i and you will be whole again

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is very impressive work i must say... I particularly love this verse...

Look at the bond between your eyes
They sleep & cry together through the times
Although they never ever meet
Somehow together they are complete

Thank you for sharing your artwork with us.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

The imagery in this piece is very striking and powerful. Very well written

[Perfect Imperfection]

I love it. It has a lot of meaning in a small space. This is the way I wish I could write. You are a great writer and I really like it. :-) (I envy you)

[Elmehdi Adlany]

Awesome indeed! I liked the rhyming scheme you used; it flows naturally and smoothly. The title was appealing to me, and the poem reflected a very interesting and emotional effect on me!