Island in the sky

poem

Island in the sky


On a tiny island in the sky
I live in absolute solitude
Where no one ever asks why
& keeping a pretentious attitude.

I used to love that earth
Before I casted it away
Since the day it gave me birth
Until I knew how hearts could sway

Yet I keep an eye on him
On a cloud made of a thought
As morning is still so dim
Although thats not what I was taught

Just one look at his eyes
Makes me smile every now & then
Regardless of where my santuary lies
I sometimes think he's the greatest of men.

                                 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[JustWantLove]

Still beautiful! :)

[JustWantLove]

Wonderful piece. The style is all over though (at least as it is displayed for me).