I can love no more

poem

I can love no more

 

I am such a weakling, my knees tremble,
At just the thought of your departure.
I never want this perfection to crumble,
I want it all to last in essence & picture.

I hold you tightly between my arms,
like a candle afraid of it burning out,
Yet lights my way like sparkling charms,
And tells what true love is all about

If you ask me what is perfect?
I would say it is making it through
Our ups and downs with all respect
and remembering it, while smiling at you.

I love you, like I never loved anything before.
My heart is your eternal shinning throne,
I cannot love any other person anymore,
Because by your soul my mind is blown.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Juan]

Your cadence chronicles a universal vibe, my own sentiments included great poem.

[Liverpoolfan]

Excellent.
I'm sure that everyone can relate to this poem in one way or another. It is really thoughtful, and quite a moving piece. It filled to the brim with an emotion that is threataning to overflow.

[Deeksha]

I like the comparison to the candle. :)

[ZaZa]

This is beautiful and filled with emotion. This poem flows perfectly. I love the line "My heart is your eternal shining throne." That made me smile. Very nice write.

[cecil]

a deeply emotional write that shows the love you hold for this person,your expressions are real and flow so well with the words you have chosen.

Blessings
Cecil

[bluessadmood]

Oh god this place is full of poets..born to be
how i tremble ,my knees feel so weak just at the thought that you leave
how i admire all the perfection and lose all the essence and all the beauty
i hold you tight like a candle to my heart afraid that it may blow away
your light show me the way with all the sparkling charms..it showed me love
i wish we will always make it through,no mater how many ups and downs
how i loved you only,only you ,you shine there on your throne
could never love anyone..my soul my mind blown away because of you
ohh what a lovely write..

[Coyote Poetry]

The last line is so good. Poem is very good. Title sort of trick the reader. Emotion and love is strong in all the lines. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[LostInThought ♥]

This is beautiful!!! I love the line My heart is your enternal shinning throne! :) It flows great, and it doesn't drag on forever... Good write! :)

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