Forget me not

relive in memory

Forget me not

As my face is haunting blue

And my hands start to rot

I am long gone from you

So I left you this forget-me-not.

 

I wonder whether you cried

And revived me in memory a lot

Although my heart aches if you tried

But please forget me not.

 

it's Sweet in scent and beautifully sad

Short-lived like a butterfly being caught

Told this is an enough life you had

That is the fate of a forget-me-not.

 

Although as my lips are icy blue

A yellow glow lights my heart

With your love, I’m able to cross through

Take care of my forget-me-not.

Author's Note

All reviews are welcomed

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Those flowers "forget me not' are what Poet been writing about for many years. Life is fair. When we lose someone in the mist of fire and passion Leave the heart to mourn till death. The poem is outstanding.
Coyote

[Justin Street]

You continue to amaze me. I'm beginning to get comfortable with your style. Right now you are the most impressive author I have seen on here, when it comes to sheer emotional depth

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very stirring piece of writing that is timeless.. Your writing beautifully compliments the title and you did this old saying justice. Sweet and a little sad.. a great reminder not to forget those fragile sides of others out there.. loved this piece.. your heart shone through it and to date this has to be the best I have read from you! It was amazing!

[bluessadmood]

ohh this poetry thing here is new to me and driving me crazy,ha ha
my face has changed to time,my heart gone cold,and i am away
wonder if you ever cried,do you remember me a lot,my heart aches for you
but please never forget,you sweet beautiful and sad..i always knew
short lived like all butterflies,you wont fly too high
i was told this was enough life for you but how could it be
ohh this fate they call..my heart still glows it remembers you so well
i knew with you i could cross all through..please never forget..
kind of sad as i went through the lines..so much aching i felt..its fate.. yes
lovely write..

[siri]

You are a skilled poet in my mind. but I am not a poet and therefore i do not know how to judge poetry. This piece has a perfect flow to it. Your style is unique and noticeable...even beautiful to me somehow. this piece screams emotion and that makes it powerful. Its strange. for some reason it makes me feel happy and sad at the same time. once upon a time i had an idea of what love is and this reminds me of what I used to miss before I forgot.... it has sorta burned a single idea into my head " you can have everything you could ever hope for anything at all and still non of it would matter and you would have nothing without love" yes your piece is powerful! it has even caused me to reminisce. hmmmm well thanks for sharing : ) keep writing!

[deeps]

I like this write i think it's quite lovely really. This is a very well written write here, such a wonderful flow.

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Poignant and somewhat sweet and nostalgic, great poem.