Blinding light

Light may not be a guide sometimes

Blinding light

I am on my way to eternal suffering,

And by these hands digging my own grave.

As my heart is still fluttering,

With the unrequited love that I gave.

 

A flicker of light that leaves me blinded,

That is every time he shows his face,

I blush and seem like a simple minded,

He walks away smiling with no trace.

 

I am losing my heart as time goes by,

The one I always treasured.

The walls where my treasure is supposed to lie,

Are wrecked and can’t reject or defy.

 

But as I see my soul being shred to pieces,

I feel a strange supreme happiness.

However my love for him still increases,

I can’t run away from this absolute blindness.

 

 

Author's Note

reviews ar welcomed

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh God if this is blindness then i would rather not see..
its very dreamy to give unrequited love..you may suffer ,still you are faithful to your emotions
and would never let go even if you get nothing,this is the beauty of love ,to give and never expect
any in return..its very romantic,its how it used to be..even if it hurts we just never give up..
the light so bliding and i cant see every time you showed
i blush and shied like simple minded,but you just walk away
times goes by and these walls of mine are shattered ,they cant reject or defy
my soul gone to pieces still feels so happy and my love
still goes wild and cant run or hide from this craziness driving me blind
this was so lovely and sweet tender emotions..
lovely write..

[Holly]

As a reader I'm not getting the vibe that the ending of the poem had any resolution. It's as if you're just describing this emotion that's enveloped you, but you did a nice job at it so I give you thumbs up. =p

[Hello, Goodbye]

this is fantastic

[PhantomDancer]

That's a tragic piece, but beautiful at the same time. Lovely!