Are we in love?

Are we in love?

A Poem by black.butterfly
"

love is an argument

"

Are we in love?

 

Are we in love?

Tell me!

my heart my eyes, my mind!

Im too shy to even wonder!

 

Yes you are! Im your heart

Where to begin? Where to start?

When you see him you go crazy

And for poor me beating becomes hazy

 

Im in love?

Dont tell me!

I'll go, run away and hide!

Easy on me, Be more tender!

 

You cant run, We are your eyes

You know we can detect lies

When you catch his eyes you lock us!

In class, The halls and even the buss!

 

So I am in love?

I see.

I think I might enjoy the ride,

Love is sweet, I needed a reminder.

 

 

 

© 2009 black.butterfly


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I can't help but wonder if this is one of your earlier pieces of writing? Quite frankly, it doesn't seem to be in the same class as the others.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Okay... that's better. But next time knock us off our feet with passion and honesty that is both profound and daring. Forget the rhyme. Cast it aside and go for the heart strings. Make me weep for your pain and hope : >)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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