Transcend

Transcend

A Poem by black.butterfly

Transcend

Transcend and triumph with desire.
No more belonging to this mire.
Eyes brimming with undying fire
and dreams of flying higher.

Desert every aggravating need;
those mouths to feed...
and implant the seed
of your liberation creed!

Fate is what you choose.
So, find your own muse.
Those who wait always lose,
grow old and face the blues.



© 2013 black.butterfly


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black.butterfly
enjoy.

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INDEED!!

Take care - Dave

Posted 2 Years Ago


as an old f**k who loves the blues, loved this poem too

Posted 5 Years Ago


yes, enjoy, don't wait, baby-bop, we're nongauranteed love
this poem was awesome!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful and quite inspiring! I real needed this. A nice uplifting read and refreshing. Rising above and beyond the darkness of this life to help others and make our dreams explode like fireworks. This is my thoughts on this. Will be added to my favorites.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it :) The language might be a bit too flowery--perhaps obscuring the message a little--but that's just my opinion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your this last one stanza's An Incredible one
Fate is what you choose.
So, find your own muse.
Those who wait always lose,
grow old and face the blues.... awesome Rhyme, powerful words, deep thought and Beautiful imaginary. An excellent work once again by you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Kal
Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice. :) My favorite stanza:

"Transcend and triumph with desire.
No more belonging to this mire.
Eyes brimming with undying fire
and dreams of flying higher."

Posted 11 Years Ago


A great read, rhymes very well, and has a point towards destiny and our path towards life...great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


It was short and I like that very much. Beautiful rhyme!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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