Thirst

A thirst needs to be quenched.
Words swallowed up are rising.
I am sorry I let you go.
I am so sorry.
I pay for it everyday.
I do not have enough courage.
I think about you everyday.
I cannot hurt anyone anymore
and I cannot be hurt anymore.
What can I do?
The inner tears leak.
I become sheer and blue.
What should I do?

Author's Note

Enjoy.

Reviews

[Dave]

To thirst for a lost love. It seems as though that thirst is unquenchable. Still, we must move on, that this thirst will eventually pass.

Take care - Dave

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Wow! I think everyone at some point in their lives will experience this type of pain.
Very well written.

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I love the honesty in this piece, I love how you literally take your heart and pour everything you are or were feeling at this time out to us so simply without really saying all that much at all. really I think that's what makes this piece so perfect though, the simplicity. Great write

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This is emotional and so well written

[17thWhitePrince]

This poem rings close to home to so many of us that have said something and yet once it has been said we've regretted it and have wanted to take it back and yet we can't =( what's done is done. So many of us wish and dream of changing the past for the things that we've said and for the things that we did; but unfortunately, we can't. It's the sad harsh, cold truth and it hurts.

Now the poem was really good and I liked it a lot =) so that's a good thing lolz =D

[eliasstone]

This is thin disguise.

[Acer]

Amazing, outstanding, powerful loved it.

[Bianca]

wow this is Amazing! i love it. short poem but the quality in side the words truly beats the size. i loved it and hope everybody loves this poem as well. you are such a good poet. i am amazed by your use of words on how simple they are but they still say soo much. excellent job as always. this poem is magnificent!!