When You!

When you hurt

i feel it too, within every bone,

scorching like white fire

When you cry

I catch your tears, and wipe them dry,

keeping a few like precious marbles

When you scream

I hear every note, and listen

taking your passion into my heart

When you break

i hold you to me, such beautiful strength

I calm you

When you laugh

I smile inside my very heart

For you touch my nerves

with pure happiness

When you touch me

I feel the love that you exube

covering me with knowledge

of how you know me

When you look at me

I see beauty inside your soul

Such perfect yellow prettiness

that only we can see

When you leave me

I am lost, completely

in the deapths of a volcano

ready to erupt with pure white sadness

Then when you kiss me,

Every colour in the world

enters my eyes

and all i see within this madness

is you!

Reviews

[highthought]

OHHHH who is that person who gets all that....
very soft lovable words....u did catch my deep...
i am hard to be to be cought

[Ray Hamilton]

Well I see you haven't lost your touch, wonderful poem as always
I was away for awhile but I'M BACK :)
Ray / The Great Canadian Buzzard

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow this is really deep and touching, talk bout devoted love... it makes my heart flutter just reading this sentimental poem.

[brittneymarie]

I really enjoyed reading this
It was touching and beautiful
great job

,BrittneyMarie