Lovers Tears

 

Maybe you came into my life

for reasons only fate will ever tell

Maybe. just maybe, you stayed awhile

to catch my golden tears as they fell

 

 A tear only meant for your blue eyes

like a tiny shining piece of golden leaf

I only ever showed what was above

You taught me how to show my underneath.

 

You gave me words that touched my closed black soul

and opened up a heart forever lost

like a budding flower turning to the sun

my heart is now beginning to defrost.

 

I don't know how to thank-you with just words

So i touch you with my newly opened eyes

My body will be yours forever now

Just like the ocean owns the wrecks that lie.

 

I only now regret you did not stay

I wander to the land of fairy dell

My question goes unanswered as i weep

I guess it  must be fate can only tell.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Not a particularily good poem... but how i felt.

Reviews

[Janice Ann]

Seriously could this be more brilliant!? This is spectacular. My favorite line is...Let me touch you with my newly opened eyes. Great write Emz...going to my faves!

Janice Ann

[Lily1111]

Emotion beautifully expressed as if we are inside your head reading your thoughts as they form. After a life time of experience, I have come to find that not everyone who touches our life was meant to walk with us the entire path of our lives. They seem to appear and disappear and life's lessons require. I was reminded of that when reading this wonderful poem.

[Aspiring Angel]

This is an exceptional poem, don't ever doubt that. When you can speak your emotions so clearly whatever words placed are wonderful! I am enjoying finding the time to drop in on friends that I have been longing to get back to reading. Very beautiful and I enjoyed the time I had to spend with you this morning.

Blessings,
Lesa

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Poetry is bout emotions and you did excellent to express them here... when the one you thought was it walks away so many question arise as you try to figure out where it went wrong. nicely done.

[Windy]

Isn't writing all about how we feel? I didn't think it was a bad poem at all. I rather liked it myself. I think you have a knack for letting "feeling" out and I like that. Keep writing. Hope to get back to reading more soon. Take care my friend.