Diamond Eyes

Diamond eyes

glinting in madness

Ruby lips

Shimmer

like decadent baubles

pink skin

smooth and

sacred.

You capture me

in your beauty

I cry with the pain

of such elegance

Simple calmness

whisks up a fury

of disaster

these feelings are raw

with pure love

Diamond eyes

glinting in lust!

Reviews

[Edmond Dantes]

for some reason I thought it should read
"Diamond eyes

glinting in the rust." for the ending. I don't know why?

Otherwise--i loved it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn that is totally captivating and sensual... I much enjoyed piece of writing, love the passion you put into it.

[beancountersar]

A fascinating and PG rated erotic poem. Words flow very well and this creates feelings within the reader. I liked how you described it..."Simple calmness whisks up a furyof disaster"...well done.

Great post!

[darkgurl]

This is a very beautiful write enjoyed this....Kim

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done ... the flow was smooth in this... imagery was perfect in this.... overall very impressive piece!!!

[Jane Doe]

Delightful! You definitely have a way with words, this is a beautiful poem. Wishing you all the best!

Jane