If you loved me!!

 

If you loved my eyes

you would speak to them

with words of pure perfection

If you loved my lips

you would kiss them

with soft special kisses of your own

if you loved my body

you would touch it with softness

and not let any other being

near it

If you loved my heart

you would die

before me

and cover me with your

very own heart

If you loved ME

You wouldn't kick me

or punch me

or break me

If you loved me

You would love me!

Reviews

[Edmond Dantes]

whoa strong and beautiful....and when you wrote ''kick me/punch me/break me" twisted it but was nice and unexpected woman! good write

[Edmond Dantes]

what a cool little poem- enjoyed it very much: last line brought it home- "if you loved me You would love me!" you go emmz.
your friend the snake master

[Wildecat]

I really dislike abuse and love this poem, especially the last three lines. Well done.

[Sean M. Addams]

i'm kind speechless on this one.... very powerful and filled with emotion ... overall nice job on this!!!!