Catch me

 

I lie

broken and bruised

You came

like a magical voice

"don't hurt my friend"

sweet, comforting words

I cry

you take my hand

and i collapse into

your whole world

hold me

keep me

Don't let me go

back to that!

You tell me

I have to

so i will...

But this time i know

you are there

to catch me!

 

 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

A heatfelt write. Well penned free form that flows well.

[Emily Rose]

Aww. Very sweet and very emotional. I like the way you broke up the lines to keep the reader guessing. Two little critiques, though: you might want to keep your capitalization of "i" consistent; in one of the lines it's capitalized and in the rest of the poem it isn't. Also, "collapse" has two "l's." Good job!

[Sean M. Addams]

really deep piece... the imagery in this is great and flow is perfect ... overall this is a really good piece... nice job on this one!!!