Fake

 

love the song

hate the words

music rocks

rhythm hurts

you mime

not real

watch me

laughing

crying

cringing

such a star

i want to touch you

don't touch me..

you lie

i,m truth

i die

you live

waters flow

over my life.

 

 

Reviews

[darkgurl]

I like this, This is wonderful, like the style and form, like that picture as well....Kim

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yes this is simple in form yet it it's you in the gut... I loved the raw emotions and straight edged approach on this piece... BRAVO!!

[Ralphy]

Wow, where did that come from...it really caught me off guard. Fake is a rather well worded poem. I like the flow and the state of confusion with the opposing views. Nicely written