No more me

 

Please don't play with my mind

it hurts when you twist

and turn it untill

i don't even know what i think

Please don't play with my past

ridiculing my memories

and leaving me with

distorted images

Please don't play with my dreams

putting them down

and planting new ones

that were never mine,

Please don't play with my skin

touching me and making me tingle

then removing your touch

and makig me feel like i,m not me.

Please don't play with my life

It was once so full of laughter and

hope, now it just lies there

with no movement

or presence

Please don't play with my heart

it's vulnerable and kind

but your squeezing it

so there will be no more

blood, no more

happiness, no more

me.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow some people are so cruel and play with peoples mind and try to control and try to call it love when its all bout their ego... a very powerful write my friend.

[Lily1111]

"Please don't play with my dreams
putting them down
and planting new ones
that were never mine,"

I adored these lines. They just jumped off the page at me. This is a wonderful poem conveying so well the struggle to remain true to one's self. I once explained the feeling as being someone who chips away at us a little at a time until we become what they want us to be instead of who we are. Just wonderful Emma!

[Ray Hamilton]

The heart is a very fragile thing
We must protect it until we find one who will be kind
honest and trustworthy
If there is such a creature out there LOL
Sad but well written
Ray

[Tara Jean Olson]

a very heartfelt expression- i just dont think that such a character needs you to say 'please!'

[Tina Kline]

A sad and hurtful poem. The pain in it comes across
very strongly, it is well written. At first I thought
maybe it was directed at a therapist type person
then I thought maybe it is about a controlling and
abusive relaitonship. Standing up for yourself, no
matter what is very good and freeing.

Tina