My shoulder

 

A shoulder

i give you

my dear sweet friend

i may not have much more

to offer

my shoulder is there

to cry on or

laugh

depending on how you

may need it

my shoulder is strong

like a thunderous storm

it is also a delicate flower

like a small white fucisa

or a massive sunflower

my shoulder can carry

the weight, the weight of

the whole world

or maybe just a kiss

it can manage whatever is

needed

so if ever you need it

it's here, just waiting

it will never be anywhere else

use it

abuse it

i don't really care

its here at your disposal.

Author's Note

Just for a friend who needed it for a few minutes!!

Reviews

[Ray Hamilton]

Ok but I might need it for more than a few minutes
I need help waxing the car
You really have to put your shoulder into it
Do a good job now

I think this write is very sweet, what a kind friend
Well written offering
Thanks for sharing
Ray

[Emily Rose]

Aww what a nice sentiment. You really make your offer appealing - even though it's only a shoulder to cry on, sometimes that exactly what the other person needs - no more, no less. It really gets me thinking about how physical gifts are sometimes not always the best ones. Good job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Thank you so much my dear sweet friend... you kindness really has touched me... you barely know me and yet went out of your way to be there... I am forever grateful!!

Hugs
Dale D