Lost dreams

 

 

 

Tears like cut glass fall,

  Bleeds a river of lost dreams,

    Waking moments gone.

Reviews

[Jessica{is inspired by ..]

Short, Sweet, and to the point. I like it. It is simple in its message, but gives a hint of deeper meaning. I love the picture you have with it. I love to see art going along with poetry, or vice versa.

I'm not sure if it is meant to be a haiku or not. I don't think the first line is five beats. But let me know if I am wrong.

Very nice job!

Jess