The ocean

 

 

Dripping waters

    ebbs into the oceans waves,

            such life forever.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Nicely done. Simple, and yet it speaks volumes.

[flippyblue]

So simple yet brilliant at the same time! I grew up near the ocean, and you summed up pretty much everything great about it in just 10 words. Very inspirational.

[Moonlit-Blues]

Beautiful.

[Murphy]

This is marvellous; to be able to take something as large as the very ocean itself and condense it into 3 lines, one must feel it, get caught in its rhythm. It's an ongoing cycle; the ocean is alive. Very soothing...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Beautiful work... yes life is a never ending cycle... you say so much with so few words.