Forever needed

even when they can hardly carry themselves they will still gladly bear your weight without a second thought.

Like the woven patches of a comforting quilt

That hold sacred memories so dear

Wrapped around our slender arms

In an always welcome embrace.

 

Like a warm bath, fragrant and soft

Soothing away our aches and chills.

Lavender bubbles and rising steam

Relax our troubled hearts.

 

Like the smiling sun lighting our way

And casting aside our fears

The dark path ahead of us all

No longer daunts the mind.

 

With the strength of a nations army

Standing so strong and proud

We know we’re always protected

By the ever relentless will.

 

With the gentleness of a summer breeze

Caressing our rosy cheeks

Our tears are soon wiped away

Replaced by an innocent gleam.

 

For a child of any age

A mother’s love is forever needed

To help us along our way

 

For when we ever lose our strength

At our sides she will always be

To carry us in her arms

until we can once again stand on our own

Stand strong, tall and free.

Author's Note

any thoughts, comments

Reviews

[NotYourChinaDoll]

I like this alot, especially the stanza about the army. This was a very good image. Your last stanza is great too, I wouldn't change a thing about it. Some of this was a bit typical, simple, like something you might see on a greeting card. Not that that is necessarily a bad thing. It was very sweet. I liked it a lot.

[victoria]

i loved the emotions portrayed in this poem, and it kinda painted a picture in my head. overall, i thought it was great :)

[James Paulin]

This is a lovely poem that was written from the heart. I love the theme and sentiments.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Beautiful poem. Loved the emotions expressed throughout. It tugs at the heart. This is an irreplaceable bond.

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. It has great description and imagery. The word choice and rhythm of the piece give it a really nice flow. Great job! Keep it up!