baby, your my drug

is a description here really needed?

Your gentle caress goose-bumps my flesh, your fingers exploring my slender curves.

My body craves your sensual touch, the kisses that linger upon my breast.

The sweet smell of your skin is like a drug to my senses, so pull my body close to yours.

And I’ll surrender to your intoxicating pleasures that make my sanity melt away.

With every soft sigh and touch, a moan escapes my parted lips.

My hands explore your perfect body, nails trailing your strong back.

The heat between the two of us makes me sweat as our bodies move as one.

So consumed in your lust I lose all control, your name escapes my lips in a moment of ecstacy.

Your soft lips find my neck, my chest, my smooth abdomen; the teasing warmth shudders my skin.

I pull you as close as can be, but it’s still not enough to sooth the craving my body always has for you.

Our parted mouths connect, our legs intertwine. Together we are enveloped in a knot so full of passion. So baby as the drug I need, intoxicate me through and through, and forever I shall be your goddess, your slave and baby you shall be mine.

 

Author's Note

just let me know what you think!

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

It felt real, and that's about the biggest compliment I can give something like this. It doesn't really feel poetic, in the sense that it has no natural rhythm to speak of. But you had something to say and you didn't even pretend to let form get in the way of it, and that's admirable in its own right, I suppose.

Kudos on pulling off erotic without getting into either pathetic or overly sexual. That's not easy.

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

Addicting perhaps.

[Lyr J. Thirsk]

Made my "sanity melt away"...which is good

[Morning Star]

Beautiful i like how you expressed sensuality and desire
Beautifully writing brilliant piece!
Keep that beautiful flow!
Have a great day..Yolie

[Raivenne]

Nice. I agree with the previous commentor, it's natural free-form adds to the feeling of this.

[Maria F. Rojas]

very nice written!

[Katseye]

very well said.