You Deserve

Make sure to love with all you got too. Deserve and be deserved.

You deserve someone who will bring you flowers. 

You deserve someone who will shower you in love.

Someone who looks at you like you're more beautiful than the sunrise,

Someone who refuses to go to bed without saying goodnight. 

Someone who makes you feel safe.

You deserve someone who you don't doubt. 

Someone who is truthful, 

someone who is honest. 

Someone who you believe. 

You deserve someone who will follow you when you walk way.

Someone who will admit that they're wrong when they are,

but also tell you when you've done wrong.

You deserve someone who will fight back,

someone who will fight for you.

You deserve someone who wants to take you home. 

Not to the bed kind of home, but dining room, in front of all your loved ones, 

kind of home. 

You deserve someone who can make you smile. 

You deserve someone who can make you laugh. 

You deserve someone who makes you feel like the only person in the whole world. 

You deserve someone in whom you'd want pets with.

Someone you could have pizza for breakfast with, 

and waffles for dinner with. 

You deserve someone who will help you on those Sundays when you clean. 

You deserve someone who will offer all they are to you.

Nothing less, nothing more. 

You deserve an ordinary person to love you extraordinarily.

You deserve to love, and be loved back. 

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is such a sweet piece! Quite simply written and I specially loved the lines :

"You deserve someone who wants to take you home.
Not to the bed kind of home, but dining room, in front of all your loved ones,
kind of home."

These are too good! Nicely penned :)

[emipoemi]

........those last two lines are phenomenal. Absolutely well penned. A couple of comments, if I may:

-"You deserve someone in whom you'd want pets with"....that "in" is grammatically incorrect, and also calls up an image I don't think you're intending to paint. My suggestion: "You deserve someone who you would want pets with."

- You repeat "someone" and "you deserve" quite a bit, and though the repetitions of the latter are great; they come in at the right times, the lines beginning with "someone" get a little redundant and monotonous. You do spice the lines up toward the end with not all other lines in the stanzas beginning with "someone" but it would be nice for that to take place earlier on as well.

Just saying. This is otherwise fantastic. A good love letter to love and a good pep talk to the lovelorn. (the pizza stanza is absolutely beautiful). Well done!