Always under the same moon. Forever.

Always under the same moon. Forever.

A Poem by Mily

Each time I glance out my half closed blinds, 
I see the big, bright, beautifully breathtaking moon. 
And each time, I think of our phrase.. 
"Always under the same moon. Forever."
And each time, my heart breaks a little more. 

© 2014 Mily


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loved this one, short sweet and simple. Alliteration it has to be my favorite tool in all of writing !! Theres also a certain skill in not rhyming out every line or having a rhyne scheme to play with. Well spoken.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Mily
Mily

San Diego , CA



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