Lost in love.

Maybe I'm just a young girl lost in love. 

But if I am perhaps lost in the ocean of heartache and love,

I really don't want to be rescued. 

There is something to the way he talks to me. 

Something in the way he calls me beautiful. 

Our love could cure cancer. 

Stop hate.

And bring peace. 

He looks at me like my eyes have a key. 

Like I'm the one responsible to take care of his heart. 

To unlock, and take the journey of love with him. 

And as John Green says, 

"You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world, 

but you do have some say in who hurts you. 

I like my choices."

Author's Note

tell me what you think(:

Reviews

[Thaddius]

Damn. The 'I don't want to be rescued' sentiment is so honest. I've felt this, felt like I'm fucked in whatever emotion I'm in but don't want to let go of it. The cancer part is strong and a bit funny - is this intentional? If it isn't just know that it works. If you played up the humor in that a little more, maybe just by adding a little modifier to the next two lines to put your self-awareness in it, it might work even better. 'Eyes have a key', it's evocative language. I'm impressed

[Mily]

This is really honest. I really really agree with you, its like I'm lost in this vortex of feeling but whatever it may be, i like it. I never looked at the cancer phrase like that, it wasn't intend like that, but writing is always the reader's. I am glad you like it, it good to know that someone enjoys my writing. Thank you.

[annabellee]

Absolutley loved it, especially that you included that great quote at the end.
I loved the raw emotions in this one, I could tell you wrote it straight from your heart.
Well done :)

[The Girl Who Loved Too ..]

We never want to be rescued, even when we need to be. Love and heartache are powerful things. Thank you for sharing.