Feathers.

His kisses were like a drug to me…

They were so gentle..

Like feathers. 

And every time I got one..

I wanted one more..

                 -e.p

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

This is like a lighter addiction since one can be addicted to kisses but probably not feathers. These too different nouns work together though. Good job!

[Eva]

Short n sweet. Beautiful poem.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Like Devon said, short and sweet. And beautiful.

[devon]

Short and sweet. Nicely done and I always like when poets leave their initials at the end of their poetry as you have done.

:)

[Mily]

Thank you(: It means a lot.

[devon]

You're definitely welcome!