I Think

I Think

A Poem by Mily
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The lost one writing her feelings.

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In my head, love isn't what everyone says it is..
I think love is putting trust into someone who might hurt you.
I think love is giving someone your heart and hope they won't shatter it.
I think love is messaging and talking everyday, across the world or across the street. 
I think love is making sure that person is okay and safe. 
I think love is hearing song in the radio and thinking of your love. 
I think love is wishing you had someone next to you to live moments with you
and missing them when their gone.

© 2014 Mily


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A nice short poem. I like the use of repetition in the lines because it creates rhythm. And the phrases of each line contrast each other effectively - another goodie. My only advice would be to add just a little symbolic imagery that could help paint a more vivid picture.

90, and I'm expecting more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a lovely message in a lovely poem. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mily

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
I think love is not letting a person go when you know you both love eachother.
I think love is holding hands on beach when sun sets off.
I think love is lying on terrace in night and watch moon together.
I think love is the pain we feel when someone we loved leave us.
I think love is beautiful till you two are together and is extremely painful when you fall apart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mily

10 Years Ago

You're right.. Love is a mixture of ideas and multiple emotions.
Love can but you back togethe.. read more
A nice short poem. I like the use of repetition in the lines because it creates rhythm. And the phrases of each line contrast each other effectively - another goodie. My only advice would be to add just a little symbolic imagery that could help paint a more vivid picture.

90, and I'm expecting more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 15, 2014
Last Updated on January 25, 2014
Tags: Love, loss, music, hurt, heart, world, street, safe, thinking, moments, missing

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Mily
Mily

San Diego , CA



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