Shark Attack

 

In the ocean of life

I swim to survive

But the people around me

Are vicious

And I truly will

Need a bigger boat.

Author's Note

"You're gonna need a bigger boat" - Quote from the movie "Jaws"

Reviews

[Ace D Portgas]

Lol this really made me laugh...It's amazing it explain so much in such a few lines...Makes you want to feel bad for a shark...Nah they still scary lol

[Luna Northstar]

I really like this poem. I can't explain it but like Veritatis Cupitor I found this poem funny...Strange, right? So anyways, I think it also was a little sad. It was fun to read a short poem from a shark's point of view. My favorite line (or two lines-depending on how you look at it) was:

"But the people around me
Are vicious"

And the reason I liked it so much is because- to a shark- it's true. We as humans are invading THEIR space. It's interesting.

I liked it, as always. Nicely done =) 100/100

[Veritatis Cupitor]

LOL i dont know why but i found this really funny.

reading it over though it is a nice short little poem. :)