My Name Is Alice

Meh

 

 

She's a goner, that one

Too far off for any light to reach

She mumbles to herself

Eyes blooshot

Yet somewhat attentive

 

She's a goner, that one

 

No technique has

Worked thus far

She sits in her room

By herself

Saying things in different languages

 

She's a goner, that one

 

She says nothing to anyone

Merely clutches her rabbit

And whispers something

As she rocks

Back and forth for hours on end

 

She's a goner that one

 

What to do with such a stubborn girl?

We've almost given up hope

But today she

Spoke

But only spoke ten words:

 

 

 

"My name is Alice

And this here

Is my

WONDERLAND..."

Author's Note

Meh

Reviews

[nono]

There is a game....of Alice in Wonderland...where its all like insane and bad...I absolutely love it. I...this poem is awesome!!!! Alice in wonderland is my favorite movie off all time. Its just like everything I've ever dreamt or imagined just went into the movie...anyway. This poem. Awesome. And I love how you could take something so popular and completely make it your own. Keep up the amazing work.

[MadeCheaply]

:D I liked it. It was simple, creepy and darling :3

[Luna Northstar]

OK, well, I saw you reviewed me, and figured I owe you one ;) So, anyways, I freaked out when I realized you've been adding a lot of new writing! So, onward with my review:


I have to be honest, I probably read this five or six times before this review. I read it once and fell completely in love. The way it's written... it's eerie and memorizing. It makes you fall into a "wonderland" of your own.

I can't pinpoint it exactly... Maybe it was the way it was written. Like she was in some sort of mental hospital.. but either way, it was absolutely haunting. The ending was creepy, I just loved it. It took an old childhood story and turning it into something terrifying. Oooh, what else is there to say? I can't get over this, it's absolutely amazing! Great work! 100/100

[EverEmma]

Eery and dark in a way that could be a prologue for a book or short story. Very well done; leaves the reader with a slight shock at the end.

[State of Grace]

Wow u really love that game dont you XD Anyways great poem!!!! I love it! :D

[Jocelin]

I LOVEZ IT... THE pic is CREEEPY but I LOVES IT! lol it's great keep writing!