January 6th

January 6th

A Chapter by Emunah June.

January 6th,

 

My nose bled.

 

Master hit me.

And my nose bled.

 

Blood came owt.

Gushing.

Because Master hit me.

 

"Daniella...this isn't perfect."

 

Turns owt, I was spelling perfect wrong.

But I've fixed et now.

 

Master says I need to stay consistent.

 

"Daniella...mistaks arnt perfect. If you make a mistak, yur not perfect. I just want you to learn that."

 

Master is kind sumtimes.

 

 

He only want the best fur me.

Daniella.

Consistent Daniella.



© 2011 Emunah June.


My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

I like that we're seeing a growth in Daniella.... she seems to be maturing (and not only with her spelling.) She has to defend her Master now, when it's obvious that inside she feels.. er...upset. I want to hate this 'Master', but I don't know much about him yet... time will only tell! Good luck in writing more chapters!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good chapter....I still really hate that master dude....ugh I really wish she could just get away from her abuser...and she is still learning...so he has no reason to hit her! Can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

173 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 16, 2011
Last Updated on June 16, 2011


Author

Emunah June.
Emunah June.

Inside My Own Mind, Amestris



About
Shalom Alechiem! Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Emmy, and I've been on this site for a long, long time. There was an admitted period of absence, and for that I apologize, but I am back no.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


January 1st January 1st

A Chapter by Emunah June.


Forever Forever

A Poem by Manda