Chapter 3: Ayumi

The pain was immense.

 

I felt myself flying in the air the second the car hit me. Only I didn't think it was a car. No. It was too fast to be a car. A motorcycle maybe. But I knew for sure it wasn't a car.

 

I fell on my face and landed on the concrete below me. I heard car doors slamming and worried but hushed whispers being exchanged amoung bystanders. I feel some sort of liquid rushing through my nose and my limbs felt broken.

 

I couldn't move.

 

One voice in particular stood out over all the rest. "Oh my God! I didn't see you! Are you okay?"

 

It was a female voice.

Followed by gentle touch.

 

I couldn't even open my eyes, but I could feel long delicate fingers running over my cheekbones. The touch was worried, fastpaced, and obviously shaken. "Sir?! Sir, can you hear me?!"

 

Yes. I can hear you.

But I can't answer.

 

I hear the fast flick of a cell phone cover and now I can tell she's calling an ambulance. "Hang tight, mister! Please hold on!" she calls to me, and soon I can hear her worried voice speaking into the phone.

 

My body hurts.

 

She's frantic now. "I...oh God, he's not moving! What if he's dead?!...no we're at the corner of Pale and Harkam street...no I dont know! How long are you going to TAKE?!" she yells into the phone.

 

But I'm too tired to listen anymore.

So I fall asleep.

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Al, you shouldn't fall asleep! Bad boy! I wanna slap him now though he is in pain. I feel bad that he can't move! Omg! I feel bad for the girl that hit him. Can't wait to read on. Thanks for sharing!

[Paradoxical]

Noooo Al! Well at least I know he won't die since he's the main character.. But still, I wanna kill that girl! Don't be hitting Al you beech. Anyway, nice word choice again. I like your style of writing. It's good lol.

[Ace D Portgas]

DON'T GO TO SLEEP AL!!

Another descriptive chapter...Good work!

Hmm I wonder who this lady is, will her and Al hook up in the future...Sure hope Al is ok

[State of Grace]

No Al dont die!!!!! DONT DIE!!!!! DX

[Rae]

What what she DOING when she hit him?! "Oh a birdie!" -looks back- "PERSON!!!" -hits Al- And that's what happened. Ha ha, kidding. Why am I making fun of this?! Al just got hit... I'm a bad person... :'(

[dachildofevil]

thats intense.
AL!!!!

[A.D. Wilson]

He can't die now! The crazy lady who hit him has to take care of him and nurse him back to health. :-)

[Sweet Little Bunny]

Al!! Noooooooooo!! Don't die! T.T

Btw the story is really good. Keep it up!

[Keevan]

Such short chapters......nyaaar!

[Anonymous]

Alphonse, stay awake!!! Myaaar! Oh, jeez, I'm so excited for what comes next... He'll meet her soon, right? RIGHT? :3