Never-Ending

When people WERENT making it so hard to concentrate, I wrote this in Creative Writing.

 

 

It's a choice, to the right

It's a choice, to the left

There's a moment for life

There's a moment for death

 

There's a ladder to climb

And a prison to escape

It's a never-ending move

It's an everlasting wait

 

With your hands, to the left

With your hands, to the right

Sit alone in your death

Climb for the rest of your life

 

It's a never-ending motion

It's a never ending movement

It's a never ending sin

With no chance of atonement

 

As you fall, to the right

As you fall, to the left

Tried to climb for your life

Only fell to your death

Author's Note

Not alot because I didnt have alot of THINKING TIME!

Reviews

[chillz]

0_0 absolutely amazing ^^ great piece!

[~* Darkness Light *~]

I LOVE IT SIS!!!!

[Deepshikha]

Even without the thinking time, it's good! I like the structure and repetition.