Zero Hour Rain [Freeze The Moment]

Do you still love the rain?

Not the rain that weather provides

But the sweet smell of wet memory

Splattered loneliness, ace of spades, trying hard to believe

That such a time was free to touch, the padlock included

Do you still love the freedoms that came accompanied by a rhapsody of abyss?

Do your daydreams still fall back into the grass, used to feeling so alive?

Tell me your heart hasn't gotten used to the sweet refrain of nature's cry

Translated, transcribed, and created into something new with each breath we take

Shared among cracked lips, whispering soft "I love you"s as we freeze the moment

Your fingers reaching for an umbrella, delicately trying not to crack my porcelain

You've always loved things like this, please tell me your map isn't missing

The key to all the answers rests within us, all you have to do is take it

As zero hour creeps between the shadows, I'm left to ponder why I came here in the first place

My happiness genuine, my passion for you eternal, yet something's missing

The skies are much too clear, and as our fingers intertwine, leaning in for one more kiss

We tend to forget about the feelings we put off on the rain

Author's Note

Idk really, just a small write

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"The skies are much too clear, and as our fingers intertwine, leaning in for one more kiss
We tend to forget about the feelings we put off on the rain"
You took me with you on a journey in the words. I like the questions and the places your took me. Easy to forget the rainy days when we are seeking to forget things. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry. Type of poem that need time to digest.
Coyote