For Practice [Rain]

Another freeblock write yey

It started raining today

 

 

And normally, I hate the rain

 

It usually made me remember how lonely I was

 

　

But then I remembered how much you liked it

 

And how you hope it’ll be sewn into your memories

 

And how, I hoped, that I’d be that memory

 

　

And despite the cold

 

I pulled my hoodie down

 

(stripping me of my mau5hood! What a shame!)

 

And looked right in the sky

 

Hoping for a glance of the One whom I praise

 

To ask “This rain

Is this the rain that I’ll one day share with him?

 

The rain that will wash both our pasts away

 

And create a new step forward towards something I’ve secretly dreamed of?

 

　

　

Or a rain that one day

 

Will remind me of another hope lost

 

A rain that will only further drown me in the toxic sorrows

 

I swam in for so long?”

 

　

Either way

 

That rain cleansed my beating heart

 

And as my breath slowed and my eyes closed

 

(I’ll admit, I stood on my tippy toes for practice…)

 

My phone vibrated in my pocket

 

 

 

 

 

 

　

“Hey, are you on lunch yet?”

Author's Note

behehehehe >u> ❤

Reviews

[Psychoticly Sane]

I like:)
Ive always loved the rain because so many emotions can be linked with it. seasons and weather are a great thing to compare strong emotions or thoughts too,

[Bluefire]

This is an interesting poem, very emotional but with a certain sense of peace.
I never liked the rain, but I find myself drawn to this writing because it's called Rain.
Does that make sense?
Any who! Well done. ^^