WAITED

I sat restlessly and waited for dawn,

i waited again until the sun was gone, 

i have thought of her the whole day,

and said all prayers a man could pray,

will she respond to my message,

and stop holding my heart hostage,

i sat restlessly and waited for dawn,

i waited again until the sun was gone.

Reviews

[Lorry]

That wait can be excruciating on a mind, hoping and praying she will look up and finally take notice.
You have my sympathies my friend and best of luck. At least you have a beautiful view to watch while you think and wait for her beautiful view to show up! ☺

[Anita Frader]

The waiting game can be a painful one and not always worth it.
I can sure relate.