Sleep well my friend

The huge yellow disc has set, giving space for darkness to grow,
the stars and the moon are glittering, to release you of your woes,
Goodnight my friend,
Sleep well my friend.

Flowers have closed, and birds are trying to find there nests,
Its time to wash your feet,make your bed and rest,
Goodnight my friend,
Sleep well my friend.

you didn't make it today, don't lose hope there is tomorrow,
do not forget to pray, he is going to help you forget the sorrows,
Goodnight my friend,
Sleep well my friend.

Reviews

[MiaM]

This reads like a sweet lullaby. Something you might softly whisper or sing into a baby's ear as their eyelids get heavy and their weight fully drops in your arms. Beautiful.

[ms. barrie]

i absolutely love this! so evocative of sweet serenity, and full of enlightenment --- wonderfully penned! thank you for all your reviews & for sharing the beauty of your words with us all! :)

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

emrick, a very peaceful poem
"do not forget to pray, he is going to help you forget the sorrows"

Blessed words to live by

[Jocie]

this is amazing very good write keep writing u r talented

[Lissianna]

Love the way this one worked out

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

What I really like this poem is that it realyl flows like a song. Seriously, I just could play my guitar and sing this poem (I'm not a good singer though :(), but yo have a nice just of imagery here. Nicely written!!!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow, this is very beautiful!

[~LadyWolf~]

Beautiful poem Emrick :) I love it!

[Mary]

beautiful thoughts throughout this poem. Good imagery; a fine expression of encouragement, for tomorrow is a new day indeed.

[emmy bon]

this is great writing, i love the message and the nice wishes well done