Mirror Mirror

Mirror Mirror

A Poem by emptyinkwell
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Maybe we are the people on the other side of the mirror.

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Mirror mirror on the wall
A girl lives on the other side
I reach for her with my left hand
She touches me with her right

Mirror mirror on the wall
Am I the reflection after all?

© 2017 emptyinkwell


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Thank you for entering my competition.

This is an interesting and fresh response to my chosen theme!



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emptyinkwell

7 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read my work!
Very amusing. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emptyinkwell

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I do enjoy to occasionally tease the human mind and I am glad you enjoyed my work.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Oooo I like this, I felt like i was deceived lol. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emptyinkwell

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! My goal was to make people think so I am glad you felt deceived by this.
Poeticsecrets16

7 Years Ago

Thats what makes a poem a poem, by feeling.
emptyinkwell

7 Years Ago

True indeed!
Yes may be we are the people on the other side of the mirror...........
Metaphysics..
Nice imagination

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emptyinkwell

7 Years Ago

I love the idea that we can only see the opposite of ourselves as that is the person in the mirror. .. read more

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I put words on paper (or in this case, a text box) and try to pass it off as poetry. Sometimes, my efforts are successful. A villain in my own right, but a hero in my own eyes. John Yossarian. R.. more..

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