LIQUID SUNSHINE

breathe.....

A rush of emotion painted in up right patterns
Love letting loose her desires
She smiles as the overall outcome to deep sea situation
Echoing in the coming and going
A triumph
A win

Author's Note

this pic is just that beautiful!!

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

I Like what you writing about... the intangibles why one can stare into the blankness of air or sea and be completely absorbed. I get it.

[Ravenous]

Nothing is a powerful or beautiful as the ocean itself fantastic work.

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh life is much like the.tides. washing in amd them receeding again.

[MandaBear]

Very nice and you are right the picture is very beautiful. Your poem did the picture right :)

[KAREN]

Very nice! I can feel the desire, and it's so full of feeling.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Highly descriptive and relevant.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very well done :) One thing that really caught my attention is that i've finally read a poem based on alliterations !! No other poet i've read so far used that figure of speech the way it deserves ... you mastered it !
a rush of emoTions PainTed in uP righT PaTTerns
Love Letting Loose her desire
She Smiles aS the overall outcome of the Sea Situation
Great job =D

[reflectingus]

Just shows how beautiful nature can get. The picture is astounding, the words in your poem just as much, with a succinct, yet beautiful piece that never failed to stop me from reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the words and the artwork. Water is so powerful and beautiful. You made me want to go to the sea. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[GunMetal]

It's amazing how awe-inspiring nature can be. Your poem speaks the same fire. Well done.