OPTIMISM DWELLS

Because she love him...

Echoes can’t go unnoticed

Speaking with a language longing to begin

Feel it

Can you feel it?

Overflowing the senses

Fanning the fever that boils within

Filling and feeding off the passion that escapes

Choosing the moment we want to be in

It’s a language only known if listened

I am the willing

Enslaved to this spell

Capturing all of the hidden power

Drinking in the intoxication of dreams emptied in waiting

I waited

Waited to be reminisced

Waited to be claimed

Such insanity was never supposed to last this long

Pull me to you

Pull you to me

Look on

Beyond the danger of “Cant”

Then look further

All I see is us

Riding the waves of life only to last

Author's Note

yea.... my heart likes to fly...

Reviews

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

its just great..........
damn...its like flying forever...lolzzzzzzzzzzzz

I loved these lines especially
Beyond the danger of “Cant”

Then look further

All I see is us

Riding the waves of life only to last

Brilliant :-)

[koty bell]

im absolutely head over heels in love with ur writing nice work:)

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

And it more than fly's with this exelent write it soars my friend im sorry its been so long since i last read your work cause honestly i was the one missing out cheers and as always ya talented hampster you stay crazy Gonzo

[The White Wolf]

Yes, I can feel it! This poem overflows in me and I breathe it as you write! When our hearts fly, optimism soars....I am so glad you are flying :)
Very Very warm and heartfelt piece. I enjoyed it very much.

[Alex Vidmar]

I like this a LOT. Well done! Going into my library!

[Lily Mae]

Me too..maybe we're fools maybe not but in any case my heart is up there flying around in good company:). Your passion and belief in it is so strong and beautiful..xo

Ooooh yes, sis, as this is true love, and you wrote it so well, hi 5 to the screen here sis. I felt your write, deeply. Thank you for saying some, I had in head tonight... love you! x