OPTIMISM DWELLS

Because she love him...

Echoes can’t go unnoticed

Speaking with a language longing to begin

Feel it

Can you feel it?

Overflowing the senses

Fanning the fever that boils within

Filling and feeding off the passion that escapes

Choosing the moment we want to be in

It’s a language only known if listened

I am the willing

Enslaved to this spell

Capturing all of the hidden power

Drinking in the intoxication of dreams emptied in waiting

I waited

Waited to be reminisced

Waited to be claimed

Such insanity was never supposed to last this long

Pull me to you

Pull you to me

Look on

Beyond the danger of “Cant”

Then look further

All I see is us

Riding the waves of life only to last

Author's Note

yea.... my heart likes to fly...

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Many of us can relate to the lines" Beyond the danger of “Cant”

Then look further

All I see is us

Riding the waves of life only to last" beautifully presenting our own feelings!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You wrote that your heart likes to fly... Well, You are soaring Sis! Love takes flight~ "Overflowing the senses"~
It's the risk we take that make the journey exciting and scary at times...But, looking further and riding the waves for True (eternal) love is worth it.

[S. Michael Long]

i like that you posted "my heart likes to fly" While reading, i felt like i was being taken from one place to another then back again (: very nice (: -s

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such power in those words...yet has a gentle caressing beat to it...
I love it :D

[Chris]

I liked the heat and feel of this...

[TawnyBlueStar]

aww this is really good :D going in my library ^^
very emotional and beautiful
your heart really does like to fly :D hahaha :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Tome can't should be a curse word along with hate... the poem holds up to the title quite well... a very inspiring poem.

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is very emotional and optimistic poem, it flows like a soft breeze! It's very artistic.. I specially like the last 4 lines! Written from the heart!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up! :D

[reflectingus]

Beautiful. I love the flowy language, the fearless words, a strength, a feeling, the repetitions, free style poetry emphasizing the freedom, and it's almost like a melody, that gives immense soothing and makes my heart soar as I read it. I particularly loved the line :"It’s a language only known if listened", because it is so true. Life can get much better, you can live in the best possible manner by opening your heart and opening your mind to the language. So much optimism, it was uplifting and great to read.