OPTIMISM DWELLS

Because she love him...

Echoes can’t go unnoticed

Speaking with a language longing to begin

Feel it

Can you feel it?

Overflowing the senses

Fanning the fever that boils within

Filling and feeding off the passion that escapes

Choosing the moment we want to be in

It’s a language only known if listened

I am the willing

Enslaved to this spell

Capturing all of the hidden power

Drinking in the intoxication of dreams emptied in waiting

I waited

Waited to be reminisced

Waited to be claimed

Such insanity was never supposed to last this long

Pull me to you

Pull you to me

Look on

Beyond the danger of “Cant”

Then look further

All I see is us

Riding the waves of life only to last

Author's Note

yea.... my heart likes to fly...

Reviews

[zero binty]

What if the insanity began long before you realized it? How is it you seem to be the narrative of what is going on in my Life and in my heart. I sinceriously believe you have insight as to what the eff is going on, and to be honest with you, it's kind of scary. The difference is that you express it in such broad strokes of your beautiful wand, and in such hopeful terms, that it only seems that you want to tell just a small part of the larger story. Always loving your works of words. Please don't ever stop.

[jennifer little]

good job well done i liked it keep up the good work thanks for sharing with me

[外人 (Gaiji..]

very cool, loved it :)

[MandaBear]

well written poem.

[Deandra Dawn]

Very well written, full of emotion. I love it! :)

[ghost writer]

there is an intensity within the words..as if you captured this uncontrollable feeling and bound it together..wonderful

[Thea]

A really creative and well written poem...
The wording is great and powerful...
I enjoyed reading this.
Well done!
:)))

[Empirik]

Flying further and further into the future as joy. I felt these words with a dark hope. It was unusual and a pleasure to read. I love the bold metaphors. They really support your emotion in this write. Great write! :)

[rivers]

"I waited
Waited to be reminisced
Waited to be claimed
Such insanity was never supposed to last this long"

The echo of these words is bouncing around in my heart like a ping pong ball lottery...The dream of surrender is fogged by by the light. Time waits for no one. I love the way your writing connects to my soul..."Beyond the danger of “Cant”" evocative hope...

[dan nacario]

i like the line..Echoes can’t go unnoticed..it has powerful impact on the reader to read the entire piece..

captivating..