OPTIMISM DWELLS

Because she love him...

Echoes can’t go unnoticed

Speaking with a language longing to begin

Feel it

Can you feel it?

Overflowing the senses

Fanning the fever that boils within

Filling and feeding off the passion that escapes

Choosing the moment we want to be in

It’s a language only known if listened

I am the willing

Enslaved to this spell

Capturing all of the hidden power

Drinking in the intoxication of dreams emptied in waiting

I waited

Waited to be reminisced

Waited to be claimed

Such insanity was never supposed to last this long

Pull me to you

Pull you to me

Look on

Beyond the danger of “Cant”

Then look further

All I see is us

Riding the waves of life only to last

Author's Note

yea.... my heart likes to fly...

Reviews

[Honey54]

I LOVE IT! you know what line i love the most "Riding the waves of life only to last" we have to know that there is going to be some trials..and that if we believe there is so much more to saying we cant do something..lovely piece hun BRAVO BRAVO! LOL

[Priscilla Sayers]

Let it soar! A beautiful poem. It permeates and "dwells" in the mind like sweet spring breezes. Had to read it again:)

[Zoe_N.]

i really cant relate that much because im a pessimist one..
but its a good poem..

[Coyote Poetry]

"I waited
Waited to be reminisced
Waited to be claimed "
I like the desire and the story in the poem. Memories can enslave us and wish for things we have lost. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

And flew your heart did. As a matter of fact you soared. This poem was beautiful and captured the beauty of a true love. Well done ma'am well done.

[Luke Ritta]

nice poem, very well written.
well done.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Hopeful, honest, and your heart IS flying!
Fly on sweet sista! You always knock me back with a pleasant "Ahhh!"

[KAREN]

Love the flow of this poem, and the ending made it real, that love can last.

[Sagar Waingankar]

Interesting one. Still thinking how actual below lines go through:
"Pull me to you
Pull you to me
Look on
Beyond the danger of “Cant”

Further you see togetherness or just witnessed it's feel?
Last line is remarkable, felt as if it came out of sharp observation and experience!

[Blue Ivory]

Your work always cheers me up! ^_^ I pictured people riding waves and being free. For some reason I get psychedelic images here :P It urges us to let our boundaries go and just think out of the box. Live life our own way without thinking about what others have to say about it