HE WRITES

he thinks of her...

 

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

She helps-

 

It drove him crazy how his casual stare caused her to shy…

The reason it drove him crazy was because he was never a shy person 

But the impact he felt from her caused him to do exactly that

What turned him on was the simplicity in her personality

That feeling of total comfort and homage he found in her company

 

The air was warm and the sky was silenced amid the stars…

Like kids they climbed on top of the hood of his car

Lazily met cuddled into each other just gazing in the dark

The rise and fall melody of Puget Sound is what softly played

She smelled of honey poured over brown sugar… or was it vanilla rain?

 

Unknowingly their hands linked while talking, how fitting he pledged…

They traced on broken relationships, mistakes that were made, and regrets

They laughed at spontaneous moments, childhood memories, and rivaled over football teams

He spoke of his fears, his wants, his past and future plans

While she spoke of her dreams, her job, her family, and wanting to run away to distant lands…

 

They spent hours out there… just talking…

Taking in on the whole sense of enjoying each other’s conversation

They had spent sometime together before 

But that specific night he looked at her in a different light

His eyes really locked in her eyes

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

That when the role of bravery quiets and the still falls

Sunnyside Beach, September 9^th is what he touches on

The ambiance of innocence held in that night before he left is what he remembers

It pulls him to ease against the rough and pressured atmosphere

It pulls him back to himself…

 

She helps- 

 

 

 

Author's Note

**cracks a smile** note received... from over seas........

Reviews

[WillyMFNt]

this spoke to me. thank you for this. The way you put it together and hit how there is a feeling of home with this person. Wonderful flow and intent.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Thanks for this wonderful romantic poem, it's superb :D

[Priscilla Sayers]

Romantic and the hint of sensuality pulls together a beautifully penned piece! love it, Sista!

[Raven Starhawk]

It certainly reads well. I can feel the connection. Though oceans separate loved ones it doesn't mean it defeats love. Love will survive any distance and hardship.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A clever piece that does make the reader grin, well done, good read.

[RG]

It really does crack a smile. A lovely, romantic write :)

[reflectingus]

THIS IS SO ROMANTIC!
I love the whole poem, the quiet story of true love, and damn, you did a pretty amazing job. Not just the story, but the way it is told, I think, is what leaves that effect lingering still, and I'd just love to read it again and again, so in my favorites this goes :) Rhyming just seems to work, and this really shows that beauty of true love and the beginning and conclusion just wraps the beautiful mid-contents in pure love and creates this beautiful aura. Great job!!

[Amila Jay]

Very very nice:)))

[Forest Green]

Pretty nice...! Beautiful transition from thoughts to notes to secret confessions of shared fondness.

Very enjoyable read...

[Jabriel]

this is pretty good