HE WRITES

he thinks of her...

 

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

She helps-

 

It drove him crazy how his casual stare caused her to shy…

The reason it drove him crazy was because he was never a shy person 

But the impact he felt from her caused him to do exactly that

What turned him on was the simplicity in her personality

That feeling of total comfort and homage he found in her company

 

The air was warm and the sky was silenced amid the stars…

Like kids they climbed on top of the hood of his car

Lazily met cuddled into each other just gazing in the dark

The rise and fall melody of Puget Sound is what softly played

She smelled of honey poured over brown sugar… or was it vanilla rain?

 

Unknowingly their hands linked while talking, how fitting he pledged…

They traced on broken relationships, mistakes that were made, and regrets

They laughed at spontaneous moments, childhood memories, and rivaled over football teams

He spoke of his fears, his wants, his past and future plans

While she spoke of her dreams, her job, her family, and wanting to run away to distant lands…

 

They spent hours out there… just talking…

Taking in on the whole sense of enjoying each other’s conversation

They had spent sometime together before 

But that specific night he looked at her in a different light

His eyes really locked in her eyes

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

That when the role of bravery quiets and the still falls

Sunnyside Beach, September 9^th is what he touches on

The ambiance of innocence held in that night before he left is what he remembers

It pulls him to ease against the rough and pressured atmosphere

It pulls him back to himself…

 

She helps- 

 

 

 

Author's Note

**cracks a smile** note received... from over seas........

Reviews

[koty bell]

absolutely beautifal poem:))

[Ink Angel]

I love the innocence of the poem, and the flow of the romance

[KAREN]

This tells a beautiful romantic story, and I felt each word.

[EMMIE]

Oh wow! Just WOW! Beautiful...I don't know what else to say! There is only one word BEAUTIFUL!

[Blue Ivory]

God, I love this! You've told an entire story in this poem. One that most would take thousands of words to express and elaborate. And you've done that in less than 10 stanzas! And you've done so marvelously C= It's like sooo sweet! Your style of writing is just original and really nice!

[SuicidePact.]

wow this was truly one of the best things I've read!

[Lily Mae]

"He writes, because she is worthy to know…
She helps-"
This whole write is flipping amazing.. I don't even know what to say...xo Your just great..what more can I say? lol :) xo

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I keep trying to say something and I can't. God, this is good.

[Genevive]

This is beautiful. My favorite line is, "he writes because she is worthy to know." So simple yet says so much about the regard they have for each other.

[TawnyBlueStar]

this is lovely :D so beautiful and could feel the love show in each line :)
really love the second stanza
100 :D