HE WRITES

he thinks of her...

 

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

She helps-

 

It drove him crazy how his casual stare caused her to shy…

The reason it drove him crazy was because he was never a shy person 

But the impact he felt from her caused him to do exactly that

What turned him on was the simplicity in her personality

That feeling of total comfort and homage he found in her company

 

The air was warm and the sky was silenced amid the stars…

Like kids they climbed on top of the hood of his car

Lazily met cuddled into each other just gazing in the dark

The rise and fall melody of Puget Sound is what softly played

She smelled of honey poured over brown sugar… or was it vanilla rain?

 

Unknowingly their hands linked while talking, how fitting he pledged…

They traced on broken relationships, mistakes that were made, and regrets

They laughed at spontaneous moments, childhood memories, and rivaled over football teams

He spoke of his fears, his wants, his past and future plans

While she spoke of her dreams, her job, her family, and wanting to run away to distant lands…

 

They spent hours out there… just talking…

Taking in on the whole sense of enjoying each other’s conversation

They had spent sometime together before 

But that specific night he looked at her in a different light

His eyes really locked in her eyes

 

He writes, because she is worthy to know…

That when the role of bravery quiets and the still falls

Sunnyside Beach, September 9^th is what he touches on

The ambiance of innocence held in that night before he left is what he remembers

It pulls him to ease against the rough and pressured atmosphere

It pulls him back to himself…

 

She helps- 

 

 

 

Author's Note

**cracks a smile** note received... from over seas........

Reviews

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

wow this is great and from this I can tell that you are in a military family or you are married into the military. Great poem.

[Starrbitt]

Wow..I could feel the love radiating from this poem. It's beautiful.

[TheSweet]

Finally an intimate piece that doesn't mention or focus on lust, love or infatuation. Which just hails you in many praises from me. The suggested meaning and complex concepts with this kind of relationship do mark a wise writer :) Thanks for sharing.

[InkingPen]

This is stunningly beautiful. Love it immensely!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Definitely a powerful piece about a memory and time long gone. Exceptional to say the least.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Passion filled the words you wrote, love was displayed! Excellent penning!

[Muse]

Another spin on the message in a bottle. The pain of messaging someone close that lives so very far away. Speechless...gorgeous penning is all that I can say.

x

[MOON]

Romantic write , some moments shared are precious.

[Manpreet]

Beautiful Work!

[WhiteWillow]

Getting to know someone from scratch, and getting lost in their world, is a journey of the most fulfilling kind. Such a positive, inspiring piece. Thanks for the smile!