2-13-2011

soul meets soul

 

 

Melt

Melting

This moment grasped my special weakness

Heat graced over my being

Layers of separation slowly collided

Moisture and desire fused together

Awakened alive

 

Kiss

His kiss

A guidance for lyrical winds

Captured

Stained within

Pleasing the purest essence

Which one finds best self in

 

Breath

I breathed

Dizzy with devotions plea

Caresses promised half a dream

Soul locked on pleasures state of mind

Taking

Drowning

Drawing me into a blissful whine

 

Low

Lower

His lips slid down my neck

Giving definition

What I longed for to be met

The alluring the serene

Quivered in passions deep  

 

Fell

Free fell

Into a place of never free

Where time had no choice but to stand still

With the press of his lips

His hands filled with me

I remember exactly how he looked

Exactly how he smelled

Exactly how he felt

It’s so clear as if it happened yesterday

A Sunday morning

A random visit

It was one year ago today

When my love was proven real

Author's Note

Only if lucky one will get a chance to be in a moment like this

Reviews

[Asb]

very touching and romantic!
lovely poem :)

[zero binty]

You have successfully woven both passion and emotion into your piece. Inspiring. That's what you are. So jealous. That's what I am. Have no wand, so I'm shaking a fist at you. In the good way. If there ever is such a thing.

[Revery]

Sweet wonderful love swirled with passion. Fabulous write.

[TheSweet]

When most of a lifetime is taken up with concerns for future, past and doing what should or needs to be done. It's the rare moments in a life where one can fully live in nothing but the current moment with no genuine concern for when it might end - but being happy in the time.

It's something I wish everyone should experience whenever the oppertunity arrises.

[WhiteWillow]

Wonderful rhythm, picture perfect. The right words make any moment, real or imaginary, breathtaking, as is this piece.

Oh sissy, this is so touching, and sparkling... I know how precious this is... so precious time will not count, stand still forever. Wonderful heartfelt writing here. I felt so calm after reading. Thank you, a fav! xo

[Lily Mae]

A moment of true bliss..thank you for sharing..xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

Excellent piece about how a memory impacts us forever.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow....told of a moment here...
where we can feel the mind, body and soul connecting between you two...
and we all hope for a s imilar unforgettable experience....
wow....amazing tender sensuality :)